Analysis of You Treat Me Like A 'Ho You Don't Know



When we first met, every day was brand new.
 I could hardly wait to wake up next to you!
We talked to one another for hours.
 Slowly revealing our weaknesses and our powers!
Early on we mutually decided,
 That as a couple we would never be divided!
The years roll on by and how swiftly they fly!
We've both been burned by things now hated,
 But when we became husband and wife all fears were abated.
As our journey continues forward and more issues arise,
 We both lost our sight of the other one's eyes!
A marriage when young is REALLY about "Love, Sex &            
 Cum!
However, when nurtured & blossomed on the vine,
 It soon turns into very fine wine!
I beg for your loving glance.
 I have to give us one more chance!
In the beginning we were smiling while having
 "Kindergarten Fun!"
Now I clearly see, it's more like being burned by the
 Sun!
You simply "Toy With Me" without much meaning!
 But My HOW FUNNY! It's ME that YOU are NEEDING!
I really, really feel as though.........
 You Treat Me Like A 'Ho You Don't Know!


Scheme AABBCDEDCFFGHIIJJKLMLKKNN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111001111 11101111111 1111010110 100101010001010 1011100010 1101011101010 01111011011 111111110 111011001110010 1101001010011001 111101101011 010111100111 1 1011010101 111011011 1111101 11111111 000101010110 1001 1110111110110 1 11011101110 111101111110 11010111 111101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,029
Words 213
Sentences 19
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 766
Words per stanza (avg) 190
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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by joyce.98082 on September 10, 2023

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Pamela Joyce Duncan-Pasqualetti

I am disabled LPN. Loving mother of 3 and proud "Nina" of 11 others! I love to write! I mean any and everything! Writing breeds knowledge, which breeds power! I am all the time rhyming and now I am trying! more…

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