Analysis of My Address Book



In the top draw of my desk is where
I've kept the addresses of the ones who care.

Took my address book, a sheet of paper and pen
To write one thing that made me better for knowing them

I saw that I would run out of paper before I was through
So this poem will carry what I received from you.

Sons and daughter in laws I couldn't have more
Then the love that you all have loved me for

Cousins though years apart taught me just three things
To try anything once, keep your promise and never be mean

From my brothers I learned how to be a tom boy with grace
Keep my guard up and "forgive "because men make mistakes

Sisters with years apart but nonetheless you did make a difference
In the way I carry myself and never to give up by having persistence

From the females that love my brothers and when push came to shove
Taught me you don't have to be blood, you just have to be love

To the friends I still have in my address book from day one
You taught me acceptance and how to stay young

To the stranger who extended their hand
You taught me never to judge and love who I am

As I tenderly close my address book tonight
What a joy it has been with you all in my life


Scheme AA XX BB CC XX XX DD EE XX XX XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 001111111 11011010111 11110111001 1111111101101 111111111001111 1110110110111 10100111011 1011111111 10110111111 11101111001011 11101111101111 1111001011101 1011011011110100 0011101010111110010 10111110011111 11111111111111 1011110111111 11101001111 1010101011 111101101111 11100111101 101111111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,172
Words 248
Sentences 3
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Wanted to thank the ones in my address book for what I received from knowing them.And a poem was born

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Submitted by B.mathislange on September 09, 2023

Modified by B.mathislange on January 06, 2024

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B.Mathislange

I'm one of 12 children raised on a 15 acre farm in a small town in Maryland. Lived all over the United States even Hawaii and settled in California. I was the first female forklift operator for American Honda when they were located in the city of Gardena. I changed the work place opening many doors once closed to the women working there.My mother was a writer as well. more…

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