Analysis of A letter from Nam

Charles Martin 1952 (Akron, Ohio)



"My love" it begins while all ears listen,
While in the Nam the cold steel glistens,
"I'm fighting for freedom and my loved ones back home",
As the letter goes on, the young soldier is alone.
The letter goes on, signed love from our hero,
While the sights of a rifle are suddenly zero.
The trigger is pulled, the bullet sent flying,
In less than a moment the young soldier is dying.
Back home his young wife had just bore a child,
That is fatherless because mankind went wild.


Scheme ABCDEEFFGG
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1110111110 10010111 110110011111 1010110110101 010111111010 1011010110010 01011010110 0110100110110 1111111101 11100011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 476
Words 98
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

My brother back in the 1970s lost a good friend in Vietnam. This poem is about his friend and how his death effected his family

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Written on June 17, 1973

Submitted by cchasman11 on August 17, 2023

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