Analysis of Mill Village



I dread returning
To that former mill village,
Where Recollections
Of sorrow linger.
Such a heavy weight to bear.

It was on your bike,
Passing by,
That hope and aspirations
Opened.
But the greatest ache,
A deepened murmur,
Was that my affection
was never here.

Unspoken feelings
left unsaid,
Burdensome at times,
weighing on my mind.


Scheme XXABX XXAXXBXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1110110 1010 11010 1010111 11111 101 110010 10 10101 01010 111010 1101 01010 101 10011 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 342
Words 73
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on June 04, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on June 04, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on June 04, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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