Analysis of Darkness is Not Emptiness



I like the darkness
I do not need to see
I am good
Because I choose to be

As darkness surrounds my being
I know that I am not alone
Forgive me for being weak
But it is too late to atone

The darkness offers clarity
And there is no need for fear
Unless you have wronged me
Then your downfall will draw near

I know I am the darkness
I do not need to see
I am still good
Because I always will choose to be


Scheme aBcb xdxd bebe aBcb
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11010 111111 111 011111 11001110 11111101 0111101 11111101 01010100 0111111 011111 111111 1111010 111111 1111 01111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 404
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Darkness at times seems foreign, evil, and an external force trying to creep in. I have heard of people feeling empty inside and overwhelmed with darkness. I like to think that even by yourself, that you are not truly alone. Being aware of this darkness or personal demons, it has allowed me to experience a small modicum of peace. Darkness is many things to many people, and to me it has been a source of strength. Being aware of the darkness is to control that darkness, albeit for a short time.  

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Written on April 01, 2023

Submitted by adamroycarrigan on April 01, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Adam Roy Carrigan

I write poetry and it is often terrible. The poetry I wrote previously was so terrible I decided to take a ten year break. However, it seems the decade I decided to do everything but write poetry has seemingly increased my ability to write half-decent poetry. Life is weird. more…

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