Analysis of Pissin’ on Mansfield



The drugstore closed in ‘09, after Walmart came to town
The post office’s open from 10 – 2, least while it’s still around
The big city pulls all the kids away
Ain’t no jobs in this here ‘ville
Seems like the whole world is pissin’ on Mansfield
And the shit’s all running down hill

The farmers still gather at the Feed and Seed
But there’s no trains ridin’ on our rails
We got one stoplight and a dead end street
A part-time cop and a plywood jail
It’s Friday night and there ain’t no doubt
There’s a cold beer in the can
Girls dancin’ and singin’ the night away
To a honky-tonk, rock and roll band

Seems like the whole world’s pissin’ on Mansfield
And the shit’s all running down hill
We gotta get outta this town while we still can
Find a way while we have the will.

The years roll by like a thunder cloud
And the wind brushes back our hair
The crickets chirp but not too loud
And our faces show a little more wear
I guess it’s too late for you and me
We lost the way and we lost the will
Cause the whole world’s pissin’ on Mansfield
And we’re at the bottom of the hill.


Scheme xxabcB xxxxxdax cBdb efefxbcb
Poetic Form
Metre 0110101111 01100101111101 0110110101 1110111 110111111 00111011 01011010101 111111101 111100111 01110011 110101111 1011001 11010101 101011011 11011111 00111011 110110111111 10111101 011110101 001101101 01011111 01010101011 111111101 110101101 1011111 001010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,121
Words 216
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 4, 8
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 208
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

Mansfield is a small town in Central Illinois and also the name of a major US manufacturer of toilets and urinals. One night at a concert, inspiration struck

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Written on March 01, 2010

Submitted by ileini86 on March 28, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

1:04 min read
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