A Day Late and A Dollar Short

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a moving and relatable poem! Your use of lyrics and rhyme scheme really captured the frustration and hopelessness that many working-class individuals experience. The inclusion of specific details, such as the cost of the car repair, adds depth to the narrative and makes it all the more powerful.
  
  While the poem is already great, I have a few suggestions to make it even stronger. One area where you could potentially expand is by delving more into the root causes of the speaker's struggles. For example, what led them to only have a handful of beers instead of stopping altogether? Is there a larger issue at play that is preventing them from advancing at work and making enough money to pay their bills? Exploring these questions could add another layer of complexity to the poem.
  
  Additionally, while the call to action at the end is inspiring, it might be helpful to be more specific about what changes need to be made and how they can be achieved. What policies or initiatives would actually allow the working class to get ahead? Offering concrete solutions could make the message even more impactful.
  
  Overall, this is an excellent poem that captures an important societal issue. Keep up the great work! more »

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