Analysis of If you could, with your Creator



If You Could

Wouldn't it be great
If muddled thought
And over-wrought
Could meet with Peace of Christ?
He met it all
The fruits of Fall
And paid full ransom's price.
But never rushed
By Evil pushed
He paced a measured walk
From town to town
His tales laid down
And of great signs folks talked.
But all the while
With grace and smile
He knew the Prophets' stance
That He must die
Must weep and cry
That Hill in strange Romance.


Scheme X XAAXBBXXXXCCXDDEFFE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (55%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111 10111 1101 0101 111111 1111 0111 011101 1101 1101 110101 1111 1111 011111 1101 1101 110101 1111 1101 110101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 457
Words 91
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 19
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 16, 2023

Modified on March 16, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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