Analysis of Sometimes



Sometimes I remember
Others I want to forget
But it's that struggle
That helps it live on
It happens more than I'd like to admit

Sometimes I daydream
Though I seem lost
I'm happy where I am
For it's what happened
That made me into this man

Sometimes they all walk away
Never look back
Or just visit to revisit
But I know what I am
No matter how close
Or distant
Sometimes I'm the better man

Sometimes is better than never


Scheme AXXXB XXCXD XXBCXXD A
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 1011101 11110 11111 1101111101 0111 1111 110111 11110 1110111 0111101 1011 11101010 111111 11011 110 0110101 01110110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 442
Words 101
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 7, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

You'll have to look within to get the answers you never hear from anyone else

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Written on February 20, 2023

Submitted by Nathaniel40 on February 21, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Nathaniel Hackey

40 year old combat veteran. Single father. Living with PTSD and injuries from the war. I have lost so many. But I'm blessed to have my two children. These writings are my mind and heart trying to find where I belong in the world. Cause I feel alone...now more than ever. more…

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