Analysis of Keeping Records
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
There are people who claim,
The having of records kept.
Of who in one family,
Had been given two dollars more...
Than the rest.
As if this reveals a jealousy already known.
And said to confess it at the funeral,
In which others have come...
To express their heartfelt condolences.
Exposes to show just how petty,
A mind like like this is the reason...
Ongoing lies told and conflicts don't end.
Unable to let go.
Although these mentally limited people,
Are fast approaching their 80's!
'I remember your grandfather.
My father.
Gave both to you and your ex-wife,
$2 dollars each.
And I have records kept of it to prove it.'
'I am so glad you brought that to my attention.
Since...
My ex-wife and I divorced,
Back in 1984. Over 39 years ago.
And your father, my grandfather...
Had passed away.
Many years before that!'
'And...
What is that suppose to mean?
What are you trying to prove?'
'Some folks will make up anything.
Anywhere and at anytime,
To make even a mournful event...
All about them.'
'I just wanted you to know!'
'Thank you for reminding me,
How sad these times are getting!'
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111011 0101011 1101100 11101101 101 1110101000101 01101110100 011011 101110100 010111110 011111010 101100111 010111 1110010010 1101011 1010110 110 11110111 101 01101111111 111111111010 1 1110101 1010101 0110110 1101 101011 0 1110111 1111011 1111110 100110 111001001 1011 1110111 1110101 1111110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,094 |
Words | 238 |
Sentences | 30 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 15, 5, 7, 3, 4, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 118 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Written on January 30, 2023
Submitted by lpahtillah on January 30, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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