Analysis of Surburban Violence

Kaci Tami 1960 (Vatukoula)



Tall, trim and tanned,
he saunted into the room
exuding passion
All eyes swivelled in his direction
Momentarily sucking in
the image of Adonis
And gasping at the majesty of it all
Inwardly, his own kind
cringed and straightened up
realising he was not one of them
At the center of the room
He stopped and his legs faltered
It was only then they realised
He had been shot
Another victim
of surburban violence gone askew
His life destroyed
by a flesh seeking projectile
Victim of a childish dare
in shambles


Scheme ABCCDEFGHIBJAKLMNOPQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101 110101 01010 11101010 0100100 0101010 01010100111 100111 10101 1111111 1010101 1101110 1110111 1111 01010 11100101 1101 10110010 1010101 010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 509
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 412
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

This poem is about the mindless death that occurs when a shooting takes place in the suburbs.

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Written on August 11, 2001

Submitted by taminator2016 on January 14, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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