Analysis of With You In My Life



I thank God every day for his continued grace.
For allowing me to wake up each morning to see your face

You are the sunshine that brightens my day.
With you in my life, I know that everything will be ok.

If only you knew that you are on my mind 24/7.
Whenever I see you, I feel as though I’m in heaven.

Every day I will treat you like a king
Wrapping my body around yours, giving you any and everything.

You’re a respectful man, charming; and down to earth;
You know how to treat a lady, and importantly you understand a woman’s worth.

It’s unbelievable the way you make me feel;
If I had to describe it; I’d simply say, “A feeling that’s unreal.”

Your sexy look drives me wild,
My whole body tingles whenever you smile

It’s amazing how when you look at me it sends a chill down my spine;
every time I stare into your eyes I feel pleasure knowing that you are all mine.

when I need your support, you’ll wipe away my tears.
You’ll help me concur my goals and confront my fears.

Every time we're together, my heart skips a beat.
And with just the sight of you,  I get so weak.   

Unknowingly I have waited for you all my life.
Instead of shooting me with a love arrow
I feel as though cupid has blessed me with You in my life


Scheme AA BB XX CC DD EE XX FF XX XX GXG
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001110101 101011111101111 110111011 11011111101111 11011111111 01011111111010 10011111101 1011001110110010 100101100111 1111101000100101011 10100011111 11110111101010101 1101111 1110101011 10101111111101111 100111011111101011111 111101110111 111011100111 1001101011101 01101111111 0100111011111 01110110110 11111011111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,258
Words 269
Sentences 15
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on January 10, 2023

Submitted by s.i.s on January 10, 2023

Modified by s.i.s on January 25, 2023

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Sarah Lateesha Hamilton

I am Proud American. I am a retired Army vet who served 20yrs defending the rights for our country. I'm a loving single mother and momma's girl. I put my family 1st. I have been writing poetry since the age of 10 and writing is my passion. I love to love. We only have one life ( that we can remember) so I live my life to the fullest more…

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