Analysis of escape



chase & touch a dream
just lose an appeal,
mesmerized by the forbidden fruit's flavor,
obsessive temptation
by a slithering friend,
a little bit of satisfaction,
the burn of enough  ...
the morning after,
tenderness became a cliche.

can you run away,
rest tonight,
come tomorrow?
let's lick the wounds together,
the bitter, the truer...
healing the deeper cuts
needs more of me for the long haul.

got to have faith 
to take night trips,
turn off the lights, 
lay down, close your eyes
uncover that emotion
let it stream over me
in even flow segments....
pacing my pulse...

some devotion 
disgruntled feelings 
what you can’t have 
will be alive somewhere else
with a soulful crush on flesh 
get high for a bit 
the reality behind the hurt,
carry your own way slowly,
where are you going tomorrow?
come with who you know,
escape with me
in these pages .....


Scheme XXABXBXAC CXDAAXX XXXXBEXX BXXXXXXEDDEX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11101 1010100110 010010 101001 01011010 01101 01010 10001001 11101 101 101 1101010 010010 100101 11111011 1111 1111 1101 11111 0101010 111101 010110 1011 1010 01010 1111 110111 1010111 11101 0100101 1011110 1111001 11111 0111 0110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 887
Words 182
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 8, 12
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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tug o' feelings

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Written on October 18, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on December 29, 2022

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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