Analysis of A Different future



Un futuro diferente

Bienvenidos al contrasentido,
¿Cuál es la ansiedad,
para que llegue el juicio final?

¿Tan mal estamos,
que en el horizonte no vemos felicidad
sino la extinción de la humanidad?

Como si fuera un concurso,
en más de cien ocasiones
se le ha puesto fecha al fin del mundo.

Disfruten del contrasentido,
¿Cuál es el miedo
si mi camino siempre estuvo bendecido?

¡En vez de estar agradecidos!
Cuando se entienda eso,
el futuro no quedará en manos de la esperanza
sino en la valoración justa de la existencia.


Scheme A AAX BAA BBA AAA BBBX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 11111 10111110 111 1111111 10111111 101111 111111 1011111110 111 11111 11010111 11111 1111 1111110111 10111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 541
Words 106
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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The future will not be in the hands of hope but in the just evaluation of existence

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Written on December 22, 2022

Submitted by idbm on December 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ivan David Brieva Maldonado

Colombian lawyer writes social poetry inclined to change the human condition more…

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