Analysis of I hate vegetables



I hate vegetables
Even though mum tells me
That they are good for me
But how come I never see her
Eat her own lettuce leaves
Or the pumpkin that she serves up cold!
She berates me to eat my spinach
So I can be as strong as a bear
She entreats me to eat
The steamed cauliflowers
So I can have a full body of hair
And be swift as a hare
And yet just the other day
I caught her eating her Broccoli
But spitting out her corn and peas!

And when I asked her my mother why?
She confessed she disliked them so
Just as much as I did
I promised I wouldn’t tell Daddy this
as long as she lets me
Eat my favourite vegetables
Like the big freshly fried and crispy thin
Potato chips with juicy red tomato sauce
It is just finger licking good!


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 731
Words 154
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 9
Lines Amount 24
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Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 287
Words per stanza (avg) 75

About this poem

This poem captures my revulsion for certain vegetables and also my youngest son who ate none but potato chips and he is a healthy man of 30 now.

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Written on November 20, 2013

Submitted by taminator2016 on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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