Analysis of Surrogacy
Transient mom to a child,
Not her own, to be too mild.
In her womb she bears,
A bailment she does care.
Same air they breathe in,
Same food they share.
A miracle she carries,
but life isn't fair.
A selfless contribution of goodness,
transfer of child is greatness.
Growing close to the heart,
a day comes to part.
Many things rotate,
but nothing beats being a surrogate.
A feel of motherhood,
a heal to the soul.
A zeal to gift a beautiful life,
an exchange of pregnancy is bribed.
To raise,in praise,
the egg ,in grace.
Untill develops to survive,
Welcomed to the world to be alive.
The labour pain creates a moment,
the stretch marks remain forever.
The cravings, dislikes,the hormones,
seem to settle altogether.
The body goes light,
the heavy heart prepares to fight.
How painfull it must be?
To shift an organ in service.
Though, to make her living,
a part of her she is giving.
Having nine months in belly,
creates a bond ,grows daily .
Congratulations to the mothers,
"The surrogates"
Life transformation in others ,
they create.
Yielding in amazing beauty!
Spectacular journey of surrogating.
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Poetic Form | Etheree (33%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 101101 1011111 00111 01111 11110 1111 0100110 11101 010010110 0111110 101101 01111 1011 1101100100 01110 01101 011101001 101110011 111 0101 1010101 101011101 01101010 01101010 01011 1110010 01011 01010111 11111 11110010 111010 01101110 1011010 0101110 00101010 0100 1010010 101 10001010 01001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,149 |
Words | 237 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 22, 18 |
Lines Amount | 40 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 430 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 98 |
About this poem
I have tried to empathize a surrogates feeling when she is left with light body and heavy heart after having carrying the child for nine months.
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Written on September 25, 2022
Submitted by Ruchiagltani on September 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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