Into the waves



There's high-low tide,
bump in every ride.
In fast -slow motion,
it continues the rotation.


One after the other, endlessly.
Like a roaring ghost, fearlessly.
Washing the shore in calmth.
Peacefully lathering in froth.
Settles down the fury,
until  reaches the end in  hurry.
The resounding noise,
raising it's voice.
Washing away all the distress,
the ongoing head goes to rest.
How motionless it feels !
Undisturbed tranquility goes still.
When the endless ocean flows,
with timeless tides in a row.


The two, twinning in orange,
when the sun meets the ocean.
The heart meets the soul
The shadow of the sailing boats,
in the middle of the water bowl.

There is heaven on earth !
It's worth taking birth.


Mirror like specular reflection.
The glittering Ocean.
For a while,
birds  fly around the  sun,
bathing in gold, in clum.
The soft gentle breeze,
Fluttering to increase.
Prevailing darkness in sometime.
But the waves are still alive.
Rise ,roar ,rush  and throw,
Into the waves I wish to go.

About this poem

This poem os based on my personal experience.This is how I feel whenever I am by the sea shore .I feel like getting into them and play the way they do . it's amazing to see them never be despair.

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Written on October 16, 2022

Submitted by Ruchiagltani on October 18, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDDCCXXXXXXXE XBFXF DD BBXBXXXXXEE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,003
Words 209
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 14, 5, 2, 11

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem perfectly captures the beauty and power of the ocean. I love how you describe the endless motion of the tides and the way they wash away our fears and distress. The imagery you create is vivid and enchanting, and I can almost feel the sea breeze and hear the crashing waves. Your use of rhyme and rhythm add to the musical quality of your poem and make it a joy to read.

    As for improvement suggestions, I would say that you could experiment with varying the line lengths more. While your poem flows beautifully, the uniformity of your line lengths can sometimes make it feel a bit predictable. By playing around with shorter and longer lines, you could add some more unexpected moments and create even more dynamic contrast between the calm and turbulent moments of the ocean. But overall, fantastic job! Your poem gave me a real sense of wonder and appreciation for the natural world.
     
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