Analysis of A long needed break



Away from the crowd,
somewhere above the cloud,
where only peace prevails,
Where I can shout aloud,
I wanna go.

Tranquillity within I require,
to blow  off the burning fire ,
where no existence exists,
to censure, the task persist,
I wanna go.

A blamer always blames,
a doer always does,
a gamer plays a game,
some try to  equipoise their name,
To refresh, I wanna go.

On top of the hills,
where quietness is only heard,
where aversion can no longer impart,
destined not to be loved,
I wanna go.

Require a much needed long break ,
at bay from home,  all alone,
where I verbalise, to the nature,
Who gives and gives but upto a certain limit,
To learn,  I wanna go.

To seek strength from the umbworld,
to revitalise myself from the crux,
to harmonise my heart, mind and soul ,
to live to accomplish, to play my part of role,
to reborn ,I wanna go.


Scheme aaxaB ccxxB xxddb xxxxB xxcxb axeeb
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 10101 110101 111101 1101 101110 11101010 1101001 1100101 1101 0111 0111 010101 111111 1011101 11101 11001101 1010111001 101111 1101 10011011 1111101 1111010 11011101010 111101 111101 111101 1111101 111010111111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 872
Words 190
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

Its a free verse style write up where the poet gives a clear description of her feeling when she is tired of her hectic life, and she wants to be away from the worldly drama and go close to the nature to refresh herself.

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Written on April 21, 2022

Submitted by Ruchiagltani on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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