After My Death



I felt light and released,
without heart and heart beat,
escaped the brain things,
I moved high up the sky,
to be real, I tried,
but, I was dead I realised.


Up in there,
I knocked the heaven's door for entry,
forbidden i was to get in, for sins.
The voice that heard was that of God's perhaps,
When i encountered, did I  ever mess up?

The voice said,
Did you feed the hungry around?
When I gave in plenty and made u sound.
Did you not  complain during  tough times?
That was, to strengthen your heart and mind.
You have been selfish all along,
cruelty , jealousy made you wrong.
My child, you' ve misused being favouritised,
Or else, entry to heaven would be highly obliged.
As it's  vacancy awaits for pure souls,
to award on the basis, they play their role.

As now,
It's  too late to sorrow .
I'm here ,to save you though.
Be honest and kind,
to the world I left behind.
Be God's son,
move on with his plan.
Perform your best,
Upon him, leave the rest.

I guess the door of heaven,
would  be kept open .
Astounding treatment to nurture your soul,
the ultimate destination,
heaven, our very own home.

About this poem

Through this poem i want to give a message to all the people is to be kind and generous to every other human being cause we are all being observed for all our deeds.

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Written on May 09, 2023

Submitted by Ruchiagltani on May 11, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,105
Words 245
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 11, 9, 5

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