Analysis of Star



From a distance I gazed upon your face
And I felt the light of timeless energy
Touch me in spite of the distance
You reach across millions of miles
And spell your name repeatedly
Not the one my kind gives you
But the one surely known
Only to your brothers and sisters

From a long time ago and far away
I see your beauty glowing
The faint crown your share
Everyone sees but perhaps passes by
You are more than decoration
Around you must dance your children
And like you, they bear names
You repeat to me in luminous ripples

From an early walk or a nightly gaze
You have my constant admiration
I see you without glass or machines
Only with my own two eyes
Though I see your family
More numerous than I can imagine
I abide with one blue member
Happy to share their shoulder to see you

From now on, I will write your name
On the face of my heart
Each time I spend a moment
Looking up to find you in the dark
And when the blue sky
Takes its time to walk across
I will recite the words “Per aspera ad astra”
And dream of the day I am with you.

Copyright © 2017 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


Scheme XAXXABXX XXXCDDXX XDXXADEB XXXXCXXB XE
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110111 01101110100 11011010 11011011 01110100 1011111 101101 101110010 1011010101 1111010 01111 101101101 1111010 01111110 011111 10111010010 1110110101 11110010 111011101 1011111 1111100 1100111010 10111110 1011110111 11111111 101111 1111010 101111001 01011 1111101 11010111110 011011111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,312
Words 260
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 207
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted by charlesedwardyork on September 23, 2022

Modified on April 18, 2023

1:18 min read
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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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