Analysis of Gd forgive me



God forgive me

its time I make those who doubted me, pay a price.
will i be here for you tomorrow or will  I
 return gold and turn up the heat?

Did you really think I could break the chains.
I threw your doubt into the flames.
The devil has a release over me.

Fus Du RAH!!x2

make sure they never forget my name.

I hope the world can see the little light in me.

And
The hell I had to overcome.

oh god forgive whats around those who doubt me.

Ill throw you into the flame.I will watch you burn!

Did you really think what you have to say would  have sent me to an early grave.
Its all just words with no validity!

Ill fill it with dirt and words your never said.

Fuck you and what you thought you sold on the story you told.

I wont forget, I know what you said!

if your gonna throw Stones,
make sure you have the back bone to carry on afterwards.

I hope what i say makes a few walls cave in.
there is no forgiveness in the end.  

with teeth so sharp, And knives surrounded with poison.

I hate that you learned my name. With teeth so damn sharp.

there is no forgiveness in the end. I will not acquit you.

I need release. A new kinda life line. Because these mother fuckers are only for themselves.
I feel a failure coming on.
The weight is pulling me down.
I had me in my grip. but im starting to slip.
I hope to set every demon free.

It feels with you Ill forever be gone. In a dream where It all caved in.

I failed all along.  Thinking I was so damn strong.  

its not my fault.

you took way to long.To turn around and see.  

I just wanted us for far to long. maybe I should depart.


Scheme A BXX XXA B X A XX A X XA C X C XX DX X X X XXXXA D X X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 111111101101 11111101111 01101101 1110111101 11110101 0101001101 111 111100111 110111010101 0 0111110 11010011111 11101011111 1110111111111111101 1111110100 11111011101 11011111101011 110111111 111011 11110111101100 11111101110 111010001 111101010110 111111111111 111010001111011 11010110110111010110101 11010101 0111011 111011111011 1111100101 111110101100111110 111011011111 1111 1111110101 111011111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,626
Words 380
Sentences 42
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 5, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 13

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Written on September 20, 2022

Submitted by Sholnyshko42 on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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