Gd forgive me



God forgive me

its time I make those who doubted me, pay a price.
will i be here for you tomorrow or will  I
 return gold and turn up the heat?
 
Did you really think I could break the chains.
I threw your doubt into the flames.
The devil has a release over me.

Fus Du RAH!!x2

make sure they never forget my name.

I hope the world can see the little light in me.

And
The hell I had to overcome.

oh god forgive whats around those who doubt me.

Ill throw you into the flame.I will watch you burn!

Did you really think what you have to say would  have sent me to an early grave.
Its all just words with no validity!

Ill fill it with dirt and words your never said.

F*ck you and what you thought you sold on the story you told.

I wont forget, I know what you said!

if your gonna throw Stones,
make sure you have the back bone to carry on afterwards.

I hope what i say makes a few walls cave in.
there is no forgiveness in the end.  

with teeth so sharp, And knives surrounded with poison.

I hate that you learned my name. With teeth so damn sharp.

there is no forgiveness in the end. I will not acquit you.

I need release. A new kinda life line. Because these mother fuckers are only for themselves.
I feel a failure coming on.
The weight is pulling me down.
I had me in my grip. but im starting to slip.
I hope to set every demon free.


It feels with you Ill forever be gone. In a dream where It all caved in.

I failed all along.  Thinking I was so damn strong.  

its not my fault.

you took way to long.To turn around and see.  

I just wanted us for far to long. maybe I should depart.

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Written on September 20, 2022

Submitted by Sholnyshko42 on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BXX XXA B X A XX A X XA C X C XX DX X X X XXXXA D X X A X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,626
Words 380
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 5, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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