Analysis of My Darkened thoughts



My darkened nights and my unthoughtful dreams
And your not here to comfort me
No one truly knows or understands
 you hold my heart in the palm of your hands but most of all you own my love.
 Inside these walls  is dragging on time,
 Not being with you is a torturous crime. Others in your life will come and go, But my love is true, and this I will always show, my love for you can only grow. I may not be rich or the handsomest guy, But I love you so much , this I don't lie. You light up my life every time you call. When the time is up  Is when begin to fall. You are my stars, my baby boo, Being with you will soon come true. So when you sleep, take this to heart No one or nothing will keep us apart so just remember as the days fall here you will be in my dreams and I hope I'm there. I love you baby Boo


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Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
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This poems written from my thoughts

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Written on July 19, 2022

Submitted by donswanson39 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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