4 days



Day one is a night so cold, so cold you can feel your lungs start to freeze with every breath You take in. Day one is a night so dark you can't even see your hand in front of your face, day one so dark so cold but so hot from hell, from life, from the life you're living from the life you're sought , in the life you once had but have recently . There's no more love , there's no more peace there's no more happiness it's all defeat, what can you say about day one hell has come time for day two.

Day two about the same as one there is no love, there isn't anyone there, no ones there to tell you, to tell your're fine, there's no one there to hold you from behind, but again it's black this guy with no stars there is no moon or clouds that can be seen CUZ the dark shallow hole is deep as a ravine but the cold is still there the hatred of hell but what can you say just the same old day.

Day three, nothing new here just a black cold night full of hate and lies and everyone around you, f*ck you despise. For ones that loved you but left you behind., They left you a new day it's a bright and sunshine but then you realize the next day is not mine, it's day four

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Is just a blink black thought in my mind a blank black thought caused from heartache depression and despair a thought tucked away deep inside my heart that I can't figure out how to get rid of it.

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Written on August 03, 2022

Submitted by donswanson39 on August 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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