Analysis of Bi-polar Universe



Weather mercurial
Rearranging,
Plans, things and thoughts.

Spring hiding
winter draining,
stuck in a naught.

Limbs sub-zero
nature callous,
the living just confused.

Days short
nights long,
birds negro and bruised.

Moon dances
sun hides,
awaiting to emerge.

Dopamine plummets
depression rises,
anxiety starts to surge.

Brutal land
heartless skies,
gray polluted air.

Trees nude
grass deceased,
grounds in their lair.

Flanges crossed
hands in prayer,
the universe buys and sells,

Golden tickets
to Chapman cars,
to escape this artic hell....


Scheme XAX AAX XXB XXB CXD ECD XXF XXF XFX EXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (57%)
Etheree  (33%)
Metre 100100 010 1101 110 1010 1001 1110 1010 010101 11 11 11001 110 11 010101 1010 01010 0100111 101 101 10101 11 101 1011 101 101 010101 1010 1101 101111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 560
Words 116
Sentences 9
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

A poem about climate change, the cause and effect.

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Written on May 05, 2022

Submitted by Brooxfullofjazz on May 10, 2022

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Brooks Smith

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