Analysis of Through the substance of our lives



Through the substance of our lives

Awake in our sleep
we sleep to wake in our dreams
Through the substance of our lives

Slow moving Hands tilted
toward the filtered light
Reveal deep set lines
and shadows that speak with age

potted plants soil in hand
Kneaded moistened compost
in clods of living earth
Planted seedlings in morning light
delicate fingers push in the ground

Pass through harvests of plenty
Our earthly journey toward the sun
in time and space so near

in the presence of its place
through the gift of its simplicity
in its freedom of that which is  
right and all that turns toward
the wisdom of the light  


Scheme A xxA xbxx xxxbx cxx xcxxb
Poetic Form
Metre 10101101 010101 11110101 10101101 110110 010101 01111 011111 101101 11010 011101 10100101 100101001 1110110 1010100101 010111 0010111 101110100 01101111 1011101 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 631
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 5, 3, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by sunrasmoondog on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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