Open to a recieving sun



Open to a recieving sun

Softly swaying grass
bending in the gentle wind
Between the lonely
blades of green and the stars above
 
descend into living of the grass
roots that sleep beneath the waking times
 
in the fragile music of our lives
motionless movement through our mind
balanced between the moving stillness
 
wakes to strip the veils they leave
in the early morning amidst the trees
 
hand to ground seeds are sown
flowers spring from waking roots
open to a receiving sun
 
in the shades of fields of corn
 
Dances of light and shadow play
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Submitted by sunrasmoondog on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BCXX BX XCX XX XXA X X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 548
Words 103
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 3, 2, 3, 1, 1

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