Analysis of Inked life of a Poet



Beautiful pain is what the sun brings
To some a curse it seems
Yet life remains
With all possibilities and opportunities
It brings failure that leaves dreams with doubt filled stains
But life never cheats determined spirits

Alcohol and drugs fill empty hearts
Perpetuated by lies and disappointments
Some give up their purposes
Defeating the ends of their destinies
Family feuds feed anger of hungry demons
Demons that live off hate and envy

I too fell
Broke down
Battered and bashed
For I mashed my dreams with my reality
Now I scream at nothing to gain something
My poetry pages are feeding off empty promises
Yet I breath life to this words
See how poetry saves my life trying to give it life.


Scheme XXABAX XXCBXD XXXDXCXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 100111011 110111 1101 11010000100 11101111111 1110101010 10011101 01001100010 1111100 0100111100 100111011010 101111010 111 11 1001 111111110 1111101110 110010110110100 1111111 11100111101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 702
Words 128
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 8
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

It speaks of life and how it serves us all the same but we respond differently. This poem also portray my relationship with poetry itself.

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by wordskillz_n on April 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wordskillz Neo

Born in Baragwanath hospital, Johannesburg in Gauteng. Francis Neo Mphosu is the 3rd child of Serame Tserema and Kentse Mphosu. He started poetry at the age of 13 after being inspired by his brother, Tlhalefang Mphosu who used to write short stories. NEO is a computer accountant having completed his diploma in 2007. more…

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