Analysis of The loss



He sat on the verandah, unfailingly,
anxiously looking at the exterior door,
awaiting my arrival home.
And nothing would deter him ever,
no weather, no time,
no rhyme nor reason.
And when I appeared at the door,
comfort would uplift his face.
Then like a lion did he roar:
‘Why so late…,
gone haywire…?
Or you forget the way back home?’
And I would enter silently
mumbling explanations.
Then, one late evening,
stars shivered in the deep above
and were concealed,
in the vicious mist of clouds.
And suddenly the night breeze went ablaze.
Now, when in a  late evening
I return home and open the door
none ever scolds me for being late.
No one is at the verandah,
none ever is at the gate.
As my old man, who cared for me…,
is no more….
And the immense dark night follows in,
more immense without him.


Scheme ABCDEFBGBHICAJKLMNOKBHHHABPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 111010100 100101001001 01010101 010101110 11011 11110 01101101 1011011 11010111 111 11 11010111 01110100 100010 11110 11000101 0001 0010111 0100011101 1100110 101101001 110111101 111101 1101101 11111111 111 000111100 101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 811
Words 171
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 616
Words per stanza (avg) 149

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Tribute to a disciplined but loving and caring father—Sardar Thakar Singh

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Submitted by amarjitbakhshi on March 29, 2022

Modified by amarjitbakhshi on March 30, 2022

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