Analysis of I am the WAR machine



        I am the WAR machine

I am as old as humanity
My strength comes from
human depravity fed on vanity.
They call  me names to suit
Whatever the madmen
 want to pursuit.
Men are born and they die,
In honour and some times in disgrace,
For me death is a simple tool in reality.
The wise, the rich and strong,
They know me,
as reliable weapon to let them rule.
Throughout the ages,
I have kept an eye on those fools,
They never learn and too arrogant
To understand ,
that I am multidimensional ecosystem,
Beyond human control or rule.
I am the only truly universal power,
No system can outlast me,
and those in power who rule demand me.
You see me in every research lab,
And every institute and school.
On Earth , under the oceans,
and the seas, in space and
beyond the galaxies humans adore me.
My work causes a lasting outcry,
The power of my actions no one can dare deny
I maim the old and the young all the same.
My power challenge any fortifications!
No one can escape me,
whether in deepest bunkers,
Or refugees escaping with their children
on foot away from my hell.
Culture, monuments, churches,
mosques, hospitals and museums,
Crumble and bow before my majesty.
No life can ever escape me.
Hear me for now
I am the War Machine
In Command and in Control.
I know no nationality,
I do not discriminate,
I am always ready to do my services to humanity.

PS
Now at eighty and an old man with weeping eyes and unsteady hands.
I still do believe in the innermost of me that humanity must and will survive.
We have talk more to each other and to absolute strangers from anywhere and of any root or shape.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101 111110100 1111 10010011100 111111 10010 1101 111011 01011001 11110101010 010101 111 10100101111 01010 11111111 110101100 101 1111100 01100111 110101001010 110111 0101011011 1110100011 01001001 1110010 001010 01010010011 11100101 0101110111101 1101001101 11010100010 111011 1001010 1100101110 1101111 1010010 1100010 1001011100 11110011 1111 110101 0010001 1110100 111010 1111011110010100 1 11100111110100101 111010010111010010101 111111100110101100110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,624
Words 344
Sentences 19
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 44, 4
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 417
Words per stanza (avg) 101

About this poem

The slaughter of children, women, men, the animals and Mother Earth is beyond my understanding. Where do we go from this hell. Are we to keep following the mad men and feed humans and their future to these War Machines!

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Written on March 09, 2022

Submitted by Poetry@80 on March 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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