Analysis of A Piece of Request



It is written You, O God
Are faithful, keeping every promises
Nothing stops you from carrying out
Your own plan

How could an ordinary person like me?
Get close to you?

You invited all to come to your place
Your invitation with no discrepancy
You are willing to accept all sinners

Your promise is firm and clear
You welcomed and talk to all
As far as we believe in you

“Cast me not off in the time of old age
Forsake me not when my strength failed,” Ps. 7l: 9


Scheme XXXX AB XAX XXB XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 11010100100 101111001 111 1111001011 1111 1010111111 1010110100 1110101110 1101101 1100111 11110101 1111001111 0111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 466
Words 97
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This request is from Biblical view point; asked God's mercy.

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Submitted by yeshigemaneh on February 16, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Yeshiembet/Yeshi Gemaneh

I was born and raised in Eastern parts of Ethiopia in the city of Harar, I was attended elementary and secondary school in Haile Selassie Day School in Addis Ababa. I remember when I was in grade 7, I won a prize for being the best student - a book "Alice in Wonderland," from Emperor Haile Selassie, King of Ethiopia. From High School, I was rewarded scholarship for higher education on City Administration, and Social Studies in the cities of Luneburg, Aachen and Dusseldorf, West Germany. I had also a humble opportunity of learning Western culture, German language and associated closely with hard working German people. My fascination and love for poems goes many years back, when I was in grade 7, one day our English teacher read, "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star ...," since then I wanted to write poems. In 1995 I had an opportunity to join, The International Library of Poetry. Since then I expressed on variety of topics or titles; I call it my ABC poems. I see my life experience as my greatest teacher, and I love to share what I have had acquired over many years with others, however, every day I am a learner. It is my strong belief and philosophy, if a person has interest and willpower can achieve his goal. As a child, my important figure was my mother. She taught me the Ethiopian alphabets, and love of family and surroundings that helped me to see many things positively. Unfortunately, despite my wonderful childhood experience and growth; I encountered many ups and down of life journey that too taught me a lesson. Now, I am in my senior years being old is wisdom. There is a saying, "quitters are losers," and I don't want that to apply on me. more…

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