Analysis of bath

Emilia Acabeo 1949 (Puerto Rico)



Through glass partition
sizzling hot vapors
fill the room
obscuring tingling liquid beads
as the translucent vessel waits
cold
white
for falling silvery streams
to trickle down
surrounding, saturating, embracing
head
shoulders
breasts
arms
fingers clenching the lavender
cleansing substance  that
foams, cleans, purifies
thighs
ankles
toes
funneling
into
a
sea
of
murk.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKBLMNOBPQRJSTUVW
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 100110 101 010100101 10010101 1 1 1101001 1101 010100010 1 10 1 1 1010100 10101 111 1 10 1 100 01 0 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 370
Words 54
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 311
Words per stanza (avg) 54

About this poem

We never give taking a bath any credit in poetry. So here goes.

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Written on June 04, 1988

Submitted by ACABEO.EMILIA on February 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Emilia Acabeo

Writing poetry since my college days in the 70's. Have a collection of over 100 poems. Married. Have one son. Former Assistant Principal in a Bronx elementary school. Retired. more…

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