Analysis of Unity



Organize my thoughts

I'm surrounded by madness

From the things I cant see

I take another breath

figure out the meaning of things

Desperation in the air

I feel vulnerable

The world has lost its way

at moments I see clarity

and there are times that

I cant see a thing

but I feel

I feel the wind touch

between the noise

a little bird sings

I am alive

Just trying to dig deep

see the look on people faces

find some common ground

What makes us all connected

what makes us come apart 


Scheme X X A X B X X X A X X X X X B X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1010110 101111 110101 10101011 010001 111000 011111 11011100 01111 11101 111 11011 0101 01011 1101 110111 10111010 11101 1111010 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 541
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4

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Written on September 22, 2021

Submitted by shantalmesa on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 20, 2023

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Shantal Mesa

I am a certified child psychologist. I am currently working as an elementary school teacher. Yoga practitioner Animal lover Dominican living in Mexico City Finding my way around BPD more…

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