Unity



Organize my thoughts

breathe in 

breathe out

I'm surrounded by madness

From the things I cant see

I take another breath

figure out the meaning of things

Desperation in the air

I feel vulnerable



The world has lost its way

at moments I see clarity

and there are times that

I cant see a thing

but I feel

I feel the wind touch

my skin 

between the noise

a little bird sings

I am alive



Just trying to dig deep

see the look on people faces

find some common ground

What makes us all connected

what makes us come apart 

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Written on September 22, 2021

Submitted by shantalmesa on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X A X B X X X A X X X X X B X X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 541
Words 127
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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