Analysis of The Halls of Heaven



It was just before my time was to come.
I would be leaving Thy presence, until it was done.
“It will be hard,” Thou had told me,
"How hard you know not,
How exquisite you know not,
Yea, how hard to bear you know not,
But fear not, for I have already sent
Your older Brother, and He will make it all right.”

Then, Thou didst hold me in Thy arms for five hours,
Comforting, speaking to and loving me,
Preparing me for what was to come,
For it was very, very scary.
“I'll come down, when it comes to this time,
And witness to all, that if you truly love me,
I will not let you fall, but in due time,
You will conquer and fulfill all your godly call.”

Then, with trepidation and faith,
I walked with the Son to the portal,
And when to the place, we left with a kiss,
As Jesus said in a peaceful whisper,
“My son, you will put me through more
Than anyone else, but you’re worth it.
I know who you are to become to me.”
And we parted in a loving embrace.

Now, it wasn’t more what I would do,
Which would make Him suffer so,
But what would be done to me,
That would cause me to wholly abandon Him, and go.
Then at the peak, when my life was much too bleak,
I totally decided to take the spiritual leap,
And jump off into all oblivion,
Where Satan has all dominion.

So with Satan and all his devils,
His whole host prodding and shouting on,
My Father did something so miraculous,
For His hurting, rebellious little son.
He hurriedly left the halls of heaven,
Where He is sung to, loved and adored,
And rushed to our earth so sordid, so full of hate and scorn,
And faithfully fulfilled what he vowed to that morn.

Yes, my Father, the God of all the universe,
Left His heavenly throne, to rescue among the demon’s
Hateful harm and abase, wrapping me faithfully in His arms,
Pulling me steadily away from that ledge,
While I screamed and kicked Him in the face.
I will not repeat the words I cried,
As I cursed my Father so, but all the while
He knew who I really was, and would not let me go.

So there it had happened, as He said I would see,
“I will personally come down to save you,
And bring you back with Me.
I went down into the depths of hell to rescue you,
And I’d do it all over again, because you are my son,
And never ending friend. I will never let my children fall,
Who truly love me, and give me their all.
Our relationship will never end, for I am Thy Father, Amen.”


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111 1111011001111 11111111 11111 1100111 11111111 1111110101 110100111111 111110111110 1001010101 010111111 111101010 111111111 010111111011 1111111011 111000111101 1101001 111011010 0110111101 1101001010 11111111 11011111 1111110111 0110001001 11111111 1111101 1111111 1111110010101 11011111111 11001011010001 0110110100 11011010 111001110 111100101 11011010100 1110010101 1100101110 111111001 011101110111101 010001111111 11100111010 11100111001010 10101101100011 10110001111 111011001 111010111 11111011101 1111101011111 111110111111 11100011111 011111 1110101111101 011111001011111 010101111011101 1101101111 10010110111111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,421
Words 530
Sentences 19
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 67

About this poem

This was a vision of the pre-earth life I had of myself with God, before coming to earth. It was meant to be a preparatory experience, for helping me face my earthly life.

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Written on May 25, 2003

Submitted by ShaneB-Z on January 19, 2022

Modified by ShaneB-Z on July 06, 2023

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Shane Brown

I am a family man of God first and foremost. I love my wife, two sons and daughter very much. After this, my life pretty much revolves around technology, music, writing, poetry, drums, dancing, singing, and building others up. I love helping to build bridges between people, and individually and collectively uplifting mankind. I love learning, and pro-actively gaining experience from what I've learned, then sharing my joy with others. My life is dedicated to loving and serving my Lord, through helping and blessing others. more…

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