Analysis of Torn Asunder
Here I sit
Between sad & stoned
Regretting shit
About the pasts unknown
If we could've waited
Before jumping the gun
I probably wouldn't be so jaded
As I hid myself from the son
I don't want to, not anymore
This I know as glorious fact
I want to hide the flame no more
And boldly and confidently act
I'm sick of all the introversion
I'm sick of all the hate
I'm sick of all of people's perversions
And to everything that can relate
I don't like being cold
I'm a cuddle bug @ heart
But after what she stole
That heart has been torn apart
I feel like a former of myself
My life feels so surreal
I don't know what to do with said self
My world is starting to unpeel
How do people love
In this world so full of hate
From the one & only God above
Who saves us from that gruesome fate
So be glad in health & affliction
And try not to wander off the holy path
God is perfect in my depiction
It's not rocket science It's basic math
Scheme | ABACDEDEFGFGCHIHJKLKMNMLOHOHEPEP |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 0111 0101 010101 110010 011001 1100101110 1111101 1111101 11111001 11110111 010010001 111101 111101 11111101 01101101 111101 101011 110111 1111101 11101011 111101 111111111 1111011 11101 0111111 10110101 11111101 11101010 01111010101 110101010 1110101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 928 |
Words | 191 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 32 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 720 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 187 |
About this poem
up for interpretation (for some reason I always fall back to God somehow in my poems)
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Written on January 16, 2022
Submitted by Blest474 on January 16, 2022
Modified on April 16, 2023
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