Love FallOut



When did she fall out of love from me
What happened to her to fall so hard?
What can I do to ever make her see
To make her realize so she can move forward
She's good at falling falling so far away
And burning every connection to but debris
I pray constantly to the one & only Yahweh
She's turning her circle into an ashen quarry
But instead of rock and sand to collect
It's the after image of each fallen friend
My X has become so blind so inept
That I fear something might happen to cause her end
So all I can do is pray & meditate
About the things unseen & unheard
She can leave, but please make her perpetuate
So at the end she can fly in the sky so high like a bird

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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by Blest474 on September 20, 2021

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDAEAFGHGICIC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 670
Words 139
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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