Analysis of Pipe Dream
No matter where I go.
Every corner I turn.
Your face is all I see.
With that same old smile,
Those beautiful heterochromatic eyes.
And I can’t help it.
The taste of your lips still lingers.
And I want mine all over them again.
But you’re not really here.
Just a trick of my imagination.
I was addicted to your touch.
Maybe obsessed is the right word for what this was.
To the curb I went;
Just to satisfy
Your need for me to leave.
It’s been years now
And I almost forgot your name.
My love for you was terminal.
Like a toxic drug;
Yet I still couldn’t get enough of you.
I was attracted to your narcissistic ways.
Regardless of every lie you’ve spoken.
Wanting you now is nothing
But a pipe dream.
A spur of the moment.
So unrealistic.
And I still can’t help it.
From the second we met;
My heart stood out of place.
I was petrified.
Mortified.
But I loved you nonetheless.
And to this day,
No matter where I go;
The scent of you still
Lingers on my clothes.
Scheme | Axxxxb xxxcxx xxxxx xxxxc xxxxb xxddx xAxx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110111 1001011 111111 11111 110011 01111 01111110 0111110101 111101 101110010 11010111 100110111111 10111 1110 111111 1111 0110111 11111100 10101 111110111 11010110101 01011001110 1011110 1011 011010 1010 011111 101011 111111 1110 10 111101 0111 110111 01111 10111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 976 |
Words | 223 |
Sentences | 26 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 5, 5, 5, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 105 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Written on December 10, 2021
Submitted by Arx7Echo on December 10, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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