Analysis of Fallow



maybe other eyes do see
the merrymaking still in me

the dancers that came and took
names of who I’ve been

here it reads like a huge void
after a private bal masqué

my smile jerked off casually
and all that’s left is a sigh

no mouth here singing honey
I’m only breathing


Scheme AA BX XB AX AX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010111 01101 0101101 11111 1111011 1001011 11111000 0111101 1111010 11010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 293
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by ludy_b on November 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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