Analysis of Put Forward



Seeing him leave, broad and slightly bended,
I’ve put this preview in the list of cold chums.
He’s going for sure. Today by then has ended
in a vacuum cleaners mouth, with crumbs.
Sterility, the house, soon it succumbs.
Without his eyes, why glow, show color.
Inert matter, the dead things, they holler
at the skirting, at walls, molds are die-cast:
Without his warmth, this is home of the mauler!
  Void is felt now. Tomorrow’s nearing fast.


Scheme ABCBBDDEDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011101010 1111001111 110110111110 001010111 0100011101 011111110 0110011110 1010111111 01111111010 111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 450
Words 85
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 339
Words per stanza (avg) 77
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Submitted by ludy_b on November 14, 2021

Modified by ludy_b on November 19, 2021

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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