Analysis of California Fall



So lucky now, a balance act
There is the constant, warm
California sun, happily diffused
Everywhere, the golden brown hills and autumn trees
Meadows, crops, gardens with lilies
and poppies
And other white interlopers
Over the last blanket of color
It is a rich, somber, yet fruitful season
If only my life resembled this splendid comforter
My heart drums its own rhythm
My mind blown like fireworks in flux
Celebrate nature’s potpourri of gyrating colors
all this
Before the onslaught of winter
Amazing how a little wooden splinter
Or a mosquito bite can bring us down to earth,
Cloud our miserable minds
Poor me! Cure me!


Scheme ABCDDDEFGFHIEJFFKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 110101 010110001 10010110101 1110110 010 0101100 100110110 11011011010 11011010110100 1111110 1111101 10100111010 11 0101110 01010101010 100101111111 11010001 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 606
Words 106
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 505
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted by arthurweil on October 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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