Analysis of Such a Haze

Juan R. Alvarez 2021 (East Los Angeles)



Such a haze, still I Blaze, hitting waves but still No Slave. Feeling loose, taking flight just like a goose. Shits so Savory and yet so heavy, burning Red hot, looks like a cherry.
     Such a haze blinding my sight, hope I have enough for tonight.
     Dreadful thoughts haunt my nights, need that Haze to set it right.
     Such a haze that dims my view, , all my life, I thought you knew.
     Turns my sight, so I don't fight, through it all I keep it tight.
     So I smoke, and take this toke, will help me cope.
     So inhale, it never fails and be proud of your cloud, that you created leaving brain cells Devistatedted.
     Such a haze and still I Blaze, living high, but watch the spy.
     I won't fold cause my futures been fortold!
    Time to sleep, time to blaze, toke it up, such a haze.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101111101111110110111011110001110101111010 101101111101101 1011111111111 10111111111111 11111111111111 11101111111 10111010111111101010111 10101111011101 111111011 111111111101
Characters 797
Words 148
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 58
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 579
Words per stanza (avg) 149
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Written on July 06, 2021

Submitted by juanralvarez89 on October 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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