My Lovely Rose

Juan R. Alvarez 2021 (East Los Angeles)



My lovely Rose, The one I chose.
     The one who made me Feel whole and so complete, The one who Swept me off my feet.
     My lovely Rose for whom I rose and flew so far, on an open road, just to hit the freaking floor.
     I made my choice so long ago, yeah that's right, I sold my soul.
     I wanted her so much and couldn't see, That gangster Ruka that lies in She.
     I didn't care but couldn't fair.
     Her ways were so hip and so keen her freaking ways, they hurt my spleen.
     Hurts so much inside, Still she cheats or tries and tries.
     Not caring, that's how it seems, still her Touches haunt my dreams!
     What I wouldn't do to once more, to make me whole, But an Oath I swore to hold.
    The one I picked and chose, The one I Love, My lovely Rose.

About this poem

Showing My admiration for my girl's beauty.

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Written on July 05, 2021

Submitted by juanralvarez89 on October 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJA
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 764
Words 150
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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