Analysis of Fragments Of Me…



Broken time and time again. Erupting deep feelings that were chained within. Inside of me, you run so deep. Fragments of me stolen, the epitome of leaves falling. My heart has been calling, calling out for something real. Rewarded with broken promises, shattered dreams, and faint memories of where my smile used to be. Fragments of me scattered across this desert of a love scorn. Torn as hate you I am not able to, care too deeply, this is true. Rejection stings like a thorn from an unexpected tree. In a field surrounded with many big silent cries for you unending. Fragments of me, desire to erase the past and build from scratch with a new us. This was deeper then lust. Now my heart shooken, mood shifted, wrestling with the fact I was built with strength of a lion. Yet..feeling bruised like that of a rodent who didn’t make it across in time. Fragments of me ..missing solid pieces of you. Trying not to miss you already..but reality it’s too late. Fragments of me, respectfully keep those of memories you will never experience with another. With me..we were destined to explode..bonded from our hearts. Damn.


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Characters 1,127
Words 201
Sentences 25
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 881
Words per line (avg) 196
Letters per stanza (avg) 881
Words per stanza (avg) 196
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Written on August 06, 2021

Submitted by NeshIsher on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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