Analysis of Changing Seasons



Artful,
As the dazzling northern lights
Dancing across
The bashful black night,  
Are your poetic utterances
In my thoughts.

Allusive,
Like the hazy rays of the moon
Lurking behind
Masquerading clouds,
Are your absent words
In my ears.

Awry,
Like seeds in parched ground
Thirsting upon
The barren winds,
Are your fruitless promises  
Within my heart.

Alas,
Your absence echos-
Swooping,
dropping deep, down
Between the expansive canyon walls
Until faltering into naught.


Scheme XXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10 10100101 1001 01011 110101000 011 010 10101101 1001 0101 11101 011 01 11011 101 0101 1110100 0111 01 11010 10 1011 010010101 01100011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 460
Words 73
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem is about the changing seasons of romance, once perfect and then distraught.

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Written on September 24, 2021

Submitted by cscribes on September 25, 2021

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Cristine Faiello

Cristine teaches 7th grade English in Florida and writes on the side to keep her spirit alive. more…

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