Analysis of Could not deal



When all else fails
What do you do best?
To many feelings running through my head
My heart is pounding out of my chest,
I am having a hard time catching my breath!
My body wants to run from all of this
Yet my feet stay planted on the ground
I feel like I'm being torn in 2
What is going on?!
I look down and see a pool of blood on the ground
Look at my wrists and realize I'm bleeding now
Guess I slit my wrists once more
No time for a suicide note
Just when you find my body you know,
That I could not deal anymore


Scheme ABCBDEFGHFIJKLJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 11111 1101010111 111101111 11100111011 1101111111 111110101 11111010 11101 111010111101 11110101101 1111111 1110101 111111011 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 501
Words 110
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 398
Words per stanza (avg) 110
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Written on August 23, 2021

Submitted by Dani0513 on August 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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