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Deep thoughts

Danielle Cristiano 1988 (Kingston)

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You make me feel so alone
Every day I'm with you
You act like you don't really care
Yet you say you do
Tell me you miss me
Then just ignore me
This is not the life I want to live
At least not with you in it
I'm so sick of feeling like I'm not enough
Like I've done something wrong
I do my best to show you
But I'll never be the one
You're set in your ways
Baby, you'll never change
I'm sorry to say
I think it's time to walk away
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Written on August 11, 2021

Submitted by Dcristiano0513 on August 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDDEFGHBIJKLL
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 415
Words 95
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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