Analysis of THE STRANGE LIFE
A strangely lonely man
Living a strange and lonely life,
No children he can call his own
No woman he can call his wife.
Mired by the storms of life
Back bent as he staggers along,
Just trying to see his time out
All dreams and hopes have gone.
A strange and awful life
Lived by a strangely lonely man,
Just trying to find a way out
Struggling on as best he can.
A strange and awful living
In this land where hope has flown,
Where only losers come to stay
And only suffering is known.
A lonely street off Essex
Where lonely losers plod along,
Where hopes and dreams and promises
No longer there belong.
In the western streets of Melbourne
The people find living very hard,
By life’s empty, broken promises
The innocent have been scarred.
No-one hopes or dreams here
All dreams of hope have flown,
Heartaches, misery, suffering
Are all these people know.
Losers walk these lonely streets
Where winners never stray,
Where all the hopes and promises
At last, have blown away.
So a man whose life is shattered
Valiantly struggles along,
Though his dreams of better times
Have all but surely gone.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | ABCB BDEF BAEA GCHC XDID XJIJ XCGX XHIH XDXF XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 010101 10010101 11011111 11011111 110111 11111001 11011111 110111 010101 11010101 11011011 10011111 0101010 0111111 11010111 01010011 0101110 11010101 11010100 110101 00101110 010110101 111010100 0100111 111111 111111 1100100 111101 1011101 110101 11010100 111101 10111110 1001001 1111101 111101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,127 |
Words | 208 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 93 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
Autobiographical poem.
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Written on June 03, 2009
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 19, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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