Analysis of Lord, Help my unbelief



Help my unbelief, help me trust Your Word
for I believe that You can do it Lord.
You asked me to step out of the boat.
I know that You can keep me afloat.

By looking at You Lord I can step out
though the wind and the waves toss me about.
Whatever comes my way I'll trust You Lord
I know, that I can depend upon your word.

Help me to walk with You like Enoch walked.
Trusting You as we both walked and talked.
I want to walk through life by faith and not by sight,
and be strong in You Lord, and Your great might.


Scheme ABCC DDBA EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 11111111 1101111111 111111101 111111101 1101111111 1010011101 101111111 11111010111 1111111101 101111101 111111110111 0110110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 511
Words 108
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

Written after reading Mark 9 23 “‘If you can’?” said Jesus. “Everything is possible for one who believes.” 24 Immediately the boy’s father exclaimed, “I do believe; help me overcome my unbelief!”

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Submitted by royston on August 18, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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