Analysis of Shadow

Erick Arvizu 1980 (Williamsburg, VA)



The sunlight bathes you
Cleansing with its living light
Your long legs and smile shine
Leaving a preview of the night

A sexy silhouette lingers
Mesmerizingly swaying
Your dancing shadow enthralls
I’m yearning to be your plaything

Looking to your glowing eyes
The Caribbean comes to mind
Your golden locks pure brilliance
In my dreams you’re all I’d find

Pink rose petals so soft
Fragrant as a morning meadow
Your lips call for a kiss
The way Pan needs his shadow

I reach to pull you in
I’ve got to let you know
But my arms are empty
Just grasping at a shadow


Scheme XAXA BCBC XDXD XEXE XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 0111 1011101 111011 1001101 0100110 110 11011 1101111 1011101 00100111 1101110 0111111 111011 1010101 111101 011111 111110 111111 111110 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 553
Words 104
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

You can get lost in your heart and mind wanting something so badly.

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Written on August 17, 2021

Submitted by thepumpkinklng on August 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Erick Arvizu

Longtime poet just haven’t written in a smidge. 41-years-old, Texas resident. more…

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